Spanish Wedding Invitation Wording Is This An Accurate English To Spanish Translation?

Is this an accurate English to Spanish translation? - spanish wedding invitation wording

Hello! I had my wedding invitation translated into Spanish for a few guests. Is this a correct translation? Suggestions are welcome, if something is wrong or if the text of the translation is not how they actually said in Spanish.

Thank you!


Mr. Ray Lewis Coffey and wife, Kathryn Peek
Request the pleasure of your company
At the wedding of his daughter
Rachel Kelly Coffey
to
Cecil West DeLynn
Son of Mr. and Mrs. Cecil West
Cindy and West
Samedi, Octobre the quatrième
Two thousand eight
four
Fall Creek Baptist Church
Monticello, Kentucky

Ray Lewis Coffey and wife Katheryn M. Peek
Request the pleasure of his guests
The wedding of the daughter
Rachel Kelly Coffey
a
Cecil West DeLynn
Son of Mr. and Mrs. Cecil West
Cindy and West
Saturday, the fourth in October 2008
to sixteen hours
Fall Creek Baptist Church
Monticello, Kentuck